Each time I think of writing an Hourglass, I feel that it’s unfair to proceed without giving credit to this beautiful person who created the metric. While a lot of us struggle to follow metric, this man created one! Thank you Bushka (click here to read his poetry; (this is currently my favourite poem of his but you should choose yours…read the mini-monos too, I think they are lovely!)
Puddle, Reflecting Emotions so Strong
images,colours, familiarity Abound
Through unspoken words
Flicked stone disrupting
Reflections, satisfying his erupting
Temper, encouraging Dreams Spilling Over!
This time I have stuck to the appropriate metric, I hope! 😉
If you haven’t tried writing and Hourglass yet, give it a shot!
PS: I wrote this one at least 5 times to make it look and sound like an Hourglass. I don’t know how good a job I have done..Why don’t you tell me? 🙂